Website copywriting that sells
Does your website makes these 5 common copywriting mistakes?
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All show, not enough substance. A website that looks great but doesn't grab attention immediately won't do much for you
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The first word is ‘Welcome'. Use the words that your customers will type in when searching for your product or service - welcome isn't one of them. Google ‘Welcome' - last count was 1,260,000,000 sites.
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Does your website's headline start with a weak, uninteresting headline? Does it even have a headline? A website without a headline is pointless. You have just seconds to engage your customer with what they want to hear - or they're gone.
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Is your tone too formal? Conversational writing is engaging, friendly and approachable.
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There are no testimonials on the home page. Testimonials add credibility. They remove the perception of risk. Burying them elsewhere is a lost sales opportunity.
"The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug." -- Mark Twain
How to put together a powerful selling proposition online
If you tell your prospects how your product can:
- Alleviate their pain ...or
- Solve a problem ... or
- Give pleasure or prevent a condition ...
then you're off to a very powerful start!
Avoid telling your prospects about your product or service's features. Buyers want the sizzle, not the steak. They want to hear that meat sizzling in the pan; to smell its juices and savour the flavour of a perfect dish.
"Nobody want's to buy a cow. But everybody want's to buy the sizzle." - Elmer Wheeler.
A good copywriter is like a diamond cutter who takes your product or service - the rough diamond - and cuts and polishes it to reveal a true gem... that gleams in the eye of the reader.
No matter where you are in the world, if you would like help crafting persuasive copy that sells from the word go, contact us today for more information.
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